Over all i like the colour scheme of the double page spread. i like the way the the picture has been presented so your model is looking at the text. i like the way her name is presented with the design overlay and the red/pink placed behind it. there is a nice use of san serif font for the text which makes the page look neat and well presented
however, i feel you have some areas to improve on. the quote is in the right place, but it does go onto the other page a tad. also the S in the first text row goes onto another page. i believe it would have looked better if you had written text columns instead of text rows. i think it would be better if you were to flip the image, so she is facing the other side.
Over all i like the colour scheme of the double page spread. i like the way the the picture has been presented so your model is looking at the text. i like the way her name is presented with the design overlay and the red/pink placed behind it. there is a nice use of san serif font for the text which makes the page look neat and well presented
ReplyDeletehowever, i feel you have some areas to improve on. the quote is in the right place, but it does go onto the other page a tad. also the S in the first text row goes onto another page. i believe it would have looked better if you had written text columns instead of text rows. i think it would be better if you were to flip the image, so she is facing the other side.